STACEY GRADED____
Do I want to read it again? No, It was short and sweet with my understanding of it the first time.
Do I understand its purpose? Yes, to take lifes obstacles and try to make something good of them.
What is the goal of the narrative? Explaining the importance of optimism, and putting forth a good attitude towards lifes unexpectancies.
Is it easy to follow? Yes, and an important message to young people.
Have I come away with a fresh perspective? I have already made this a point in my own life, so its just a refreshment.
Were there any places that needed strengthening? Not really, it was short and to the point, with a scenario putting the purpose in perspective.
I give her a 25/25 due to the following:
She used strong dialect, with attention to detail.
No grammatical or puntuation errors were found.
Overall good description and meaning of the immediate topic.
Selma's Project
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