Felisha,

I'm re-reading your first paragraph--this time, out loud. I'm noticing an interesting consistency. You're sentences all seem to have the same particular meter, or timing, and as I read they compel me to read them with a certain bounce. Is this intentional? If so, you might want to consider rupturing this meter in your resolution sentence at the end of the paragraph, or perhaps in the first sentence in your next paragraph. Talk to me,

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