What I based the grade on:

5 pts Was I interested? Did the narrative draw the reader in.

5 pts Mechanics: Structure, Format, and Grammar.

5 pts Clarity: Was the narrative easy to follow? Was there a clear direction the narrative was going?

5 pts Overall tone and message.

5 pts Completed the overall assignment: Remixes, Process, and Links.

Sugestions and Comments:

5/5 Was I interested? Yes. What really made the narrative interesting was your driving passion for these dogs. It was evident throughout the narrative. I loved your useage of discriptive type of language. It really was great thinking on your part, because it pulled the audience into the story. The discriptive style of writing was helpful for the readers to link images in their heads of what you are trying to convey. I also liked the fact that you drew from your experiences to direct your narrative.

4/5 Mechanics: I thought the format was good. From reading your narrative it seemed as if you were formatting it as more of a story type of format. Which is good, because the readers are more inclined to want to read the narrative again. The only thing was there were just a couple of run ons. But, I no expert. Overall it was good though.

5/5 Clarity: Morgan I felt that your narrative had a clear direction and clear purpose. Overall, the narrative was pretty easy to follow.

5/5 Overall tone and message: The overall tone was strong and had a strong presence in the narrative. It was obviously coming from your compassion for animals. Which is pretty awesome. The message your narrative delivered I also felt the same way about. Overall, your narrative was interesting for animal lovers and non animal lover alike.

4/5 Completed the Overall assignment: Morgan, your remixes are great. I enjoyed the way you remixed Paul's and Tony's. I could not find the third remix though, which I probably overlooked. So, if it is somewhere on the Wiki just link it to this page. The only thing I would suggest is to expand your cover page a little more, and have your other pages link up to that page.

Here are some examples from students in our class:

Naussicaa's:

http://enc3250.pbwiki.com/Naussicaa's+BCLR

Shannon's:

http://enc3250.pbwiki.com/Shannon%27s-Cover-Page%202

Vivian's

http://enc3250.pbwiki.com/VI+Narrative+cover+page

Kelly's:

http://enc3250.pbwiki.com/Narrative-Cover-Page

TOTAL 23/25 Good Job!

Nickel